Here is the very first draft we have made as a group. Whilst we have done well it what we have made so far, there are some things that I would like to change myself. Firstly, I believe that a couple of the shots are not good enough for our own high standards. Some that come into mind are the shots of Mark holding a piece of paper or during the scene in London. The former is too dark and grainy to read what is going on whilst the latter is handheld and therefore reduces the quality of the trailer. We will now regroup after the Christmas period to work towards gaining some feedback on our piece and implementing the improvements suggested.