Obtaining New Feedback on V2

After having trialed our trailer with some new audiences, we have established that the following needs to change with our trailer.

  • The voiceover from Hans should not go over the titles as it is difficult for the audience to read and listen to something at the same time.
  • The shots of the bedroom scene still need to change
  • The titles do not fit the noir genre and should be made darker
  • Some of the shots (for example, the job interview and hacking the computer) do not follow the visual conventions of noir and should, therefore, be changed
  • The ending could be slightly faster paced still
  • The sequence from the bedroom to the car is too linear

We will now attempt to act on these suggestions to come close to producing a final version of our trailer.

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