The Widow’s Web: Draft 3

Here is the latest draft of our trailer. Since the previous version, the following things have been changed:

  • Some of the shots at the beginning of the trailer have been refilmed to conform to the visual conventions of noir. This makes the trailer look more effective in terms of our brief
  • We have added some background noise to the scenes that have dubbed voiceovers. This was to make the scenes sound more natural within their given context
  • We shuffled around some of the shots in the trailer to make the narrative more fragmented
  • We changed the titles to have a darker background, once again in a move to conform the visual conventions of the genre
  • Increased the frequency of shots at the end of the trailer to reflect the pace of the music
  • Added some more shots in the block at the end to fill the gap that we had
  • Ensured no voiceovers clashed with the titles that were on screen

These are the things that we still intend to change:

  • Film some final shots to go in the remaining gaps we have
  • Tighten up the music transitions
  • Add some more background noise to the shots that still need it

We are now very near to completion for the final finished product which should be ready within the next week or so.

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